I disagree with Mo I'm afraid..not sure why her neck has to be thicker. I think you have captured her position perfectly. I love this painting the way it is. It is open, free flowing, vibrant and alive. There is lots of variation and great tonal depth.
I'm thinking an early Matisse. I personally think it is finished and I would not want to put anything more into the composition as it might become too cramped.
If you ever want to sell it to me...and if i can afford it! I want to buy it..i love it that much!
I would follow the suggestions that it is wonderful the way that it is!
Let the viewer see what they see or want to see.
And I am in love with the vintage look.
I already have it in a tube with your name on it.
I created my own story before I read your description Lee. And it's a lovely one too! There's something soothing in the colours and the forms you used in this piece. I'd edit some elements, maybe around the lower left portion. imho. Overall, its ready for primetime!
i really like the colors and composition here too. I especially like the round - mirror? whatever it is, I like it.